Today's our final day to make ammendments to our documentary. Yesterday both Ms Brown, and Ms Taylor viewed our documentary and suggested changes to improve it. These changes include:
*Correcting spelling mistakes
*Changing certain slides (e.g the times)
*Adding titles (e.g Part 4)

We plan to make these corrections today in the lesson.

Almost there

We have nearly finished,

in todays lesson we did more editing,. . . . . . . . We just need to finish adding credits.

This logo is needed as a voice over (so we can use it next lesson)

Where WE Are

After M.M & R.S finished the Sean's voiceover in Mr Beckets office, we did some more editing, and had our 1st screening the next lesson, (results shown underneath). After recieving audience feedback the group focused on making appropriate ammendments to our documentary. We're focussing on cutting some of Miss Birbalsingh interview and replacing it with a voiceover, as there was too much footage on her hands. Y.M & D.A gathered appropriate information, which we could use as slides through Miss Birbalsigh voice over, whilst M.M & R.S cut out inappropriate footage (to save time) and tried to decide what parts of the interview to use and not to use. We should be finished in time.